Comments on: Fiction Friday #155

By: Uncle Tee

Uncle Tee — Mon, 17 May 2010 13:57:03 +0000

Good, dark story…I liked it. I was wondering as I read it where the prompt would pop in. Nice job.

Mine:
http://uncleteebooks.blogspot.com/2010/05/fiction-friday-may-14-2010.html

By: Shelli

Shelli — Sun, 16 May 2010 16:43:11 +0000

I love a good creepy ending! I agree, I thought this was a fun prompt today. So many possible mistakes! It's been fun to read, too. Good story. .-= Shelli´s last blog ..Mistaken =-.

By: Eileen Andrews

Eileen Andrews — Sun, 16 May 2010 13:19:13 +0000

Wow, that was really interesting. I got sucked into it thinking she’d be so happy with this man. Writing romance I find it fascinating because many of those passionate love affairs in real life do end dramatically involving the law. And my job is to romanticize that passion There definitely are two sides of every coin.
Bravo
Eileen

By: Walt

Walt — Sat, 15 May 2010 12:53:21 +0000

I like the dark twist in the story. Seeing Jeremy go from being deeply loved to deeply feared really drove the story home for me. Excellent piece .-= Walt´s last blog ..Fiction Friday #155 – A Shiver in the Darkness =-.

By: Laura Rachel Fox

Laura Rachel Fox — Sat, 15 May 2010 10:52:26 +0000

I like the turn of events. I thought this was going to be a real love story, but it turned dark quickly. Disturbing turn of events, but the pay off is nice. It’s sad that such an amazing love could go so horribly wrong.

I’d like to read those letters and see Jeremy’s progression from doting to obsession.

By: Adam Byatt

Adam Byatt — Sat, 15 May 2010 03:04:46 +0000

You can easily see the depth of the relationship behind the characters, and have questions unanswered, making them complex and distinct. .-= Adam Byatt´s last blog ..Comic Superhero =-.