Comments on: Fiction Friday #141

By: Amy

Amy — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 11:41:49 +0000

Well, that was unexpected!
I really liked the time-traveler-twist.
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By: Jess

Jess — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 15:26:39 +0000

Nice job!
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By: Annie

Annie — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 01:07:20 +0000

Loved it. Just when I was all comfy inthe 18 00s got a slap from the future.well paced naturalistic dialogue and some solid charcters to play with at a different. Time

By: Denise

Denise — Tue, 09 Feb 2010 00:38:11 +0000

Great Job!

By: Newtowritinggirl

Newtowritinggirl — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 14:11:14 +0000

I really like the mixed up genres, very cleverly done
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By: Jules @ Que Pasa?

Jules @ Que Pasa? — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 00:26:32 +0000

Great story, John. I was set in my mind to the old western days. Then, was suddenly surprised with the technological twist. Thanks for visiting. ~Jules

By: Jules

Jules — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 00:22:01 +0000

Ah, good transition from the old western days to the sci-fi. An unexpected surprise ending. Thanks for visiting! ~Jules
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By: Chris Chartrand

Chris Chartrand — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 17:42:30 +0000

Nice ending. I’m a huge fan of weird western so this was right up my alley. I like Tailcoat’s retort to the judge. Cool
~chris

By: vivi

vivi — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 17:33:26 +0000

I too liked the time-traveler aspect, especially since Tailcoat seem to be able to control it.

By: Zora

Zora — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 16:59:23 +0000

Well, that was unexpected!
I really liked the time-traveler-twist.
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