Comments on: Fiction Friday #134

By: Sentient

Sentient — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 17:56:35 +0000

I guess Martha liked it.
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By: Zoray

Zoray — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 02:57:48 +0000

Yeah, I thought the guard was going to return and ask what the hell he was doing or something, but that end was unexpected.
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By: mark

mark — Sat, 19 Dec 2009 21:00:55 +0000

I truly expected him to get caught and into some sort of trouble. Just not from that direction.

Well played.

By: Paul

Paul — Sat, 19 Dec 2009 14:48:19 +0000

I love the way you create the atmosphere of this piece.
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