Comments on: Fiction Friday #133

By: HYI

HYI — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 05:27:03 +0000

Yea, it’s really John, esp the character of Carl. Can’t wait for more.

By: Benjamin Solah

Benjamin Solah — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:40:53 +0000

First I've read of your work too and I like it. I love the surreal character of Carl and can really picture him in my head. .-= Benjamin Solah´s last blog ..365: Day 97 & 98 =-.

By: Sebtuebt

Sebtuebt — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 18:01:04 +0000

I love this. And oddly enough, I have the perfect dress for tonight. Vampyre inspired with black and red and white. I always loved vamp lore. .-= Sebtuebt´s last blog ..The Usual =-.

By: CJT

CJT — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 14:21:14 +0000

This was deliciously dark. I love the story line and what you’ve done with it. Welcome to Fiction Friday writing, too. Always good to read more authors.

Check out mine at: http://wordvamp.wordpress.com/2009/12/11/called-by-a-goddess-to-serve/

By: Annie Evett

Annie Evett — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 04:00:11 +0000

Welcome to Friday Fiction! So delightful to have “new blood” and what a way to announce yourself!
Not only is it a great way to air a draft or thoughts, explore a character or just get over writers block; but an excellent exercise in giving constructive criticism.

I enjoyed the confusion to whether this was set in a fantasy, gothic or other dreamscape world, before being relieved to find the genre of modernistic realism. You set the tempo in an well paced manner, utilising short sentences to reflect the panic the preacher (and no doubt the congregation) was feeling.

my first draft offering can be found here. http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/12/first-blooding.html